turtlethatroars

Hello, hello, hello! This piece is very nice. I think there should be a bit more punctuation throughout the piece although. Your spelling is good but I think the grammar ...

Hello, hello, hello! I absolutely love this piece!! I like how it rhymes in the very beginning and then it stops, like there doesn't need to be rhyming throughout the ...

Hello, hello, hello! This is a really good sonnet. I personally had to write a sonnet last year and mine didn't turn out as good as yours. As far as ...

Heyloo! I found this piece to be incredible! As a person that has experienced 2 suicides in my local communities over the past 2 years this poem means a lot ...

Heyloo! This is a good piece of work. My favorite line is I grab his dark-skinned hand and whisper 'run'. It reminds me greatly of a many books I've read ...

Hey, I really found this piece to be very touching to me because I have been in a few situations like that before. I do think it should be organized ...

This is a great short story in my eyes.There are a few things I would change though. [quote]At that moment she realized that it didn’t matter to her whether Dean ...

This is a great poem. I love the rhyming pattern. Some of them seem forced though like [quote]I love you - more than ANYTHING, For you - a song I'll ...

Hey, I haven't been on in a while so I am just getting to this now. When I started reading I really couldn't stop reading. I don't think that anything ...

I thought it was very interesting. I really didn't understand what they were "hunting" until it talked about aliens. It sort-of reminded me of the movie Cowboys and Aliens. It ...

I love it :) my favorite lines are: The storm is behind me but Hell before and - when existence was a simple puzzle - Now becomes an discernible torrent

Hey, being the first novel I have read on here it is great :) There are a few errors with spelling and I think you missed a word but, other ...

I love it

I loved it. I repeat lines in my poem as well so I don't think it needs to be changed. My favorites part of the poem are: Closed-in and emotionless, ...

I liked it alot. I don't think you need to change anything. my favorite part is if you sit below the maple tree you can see the glowing leaves like ...