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Torrey Culbertson

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    No problem! :)

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Culture Re: Celebrate Mothers, Celebrate Life.

    Thank you! I have had a couple people point out how I grouped all mothers into one topic. When I get the time, your suggestions for having more sources and ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: My Facade Broken

    Oh, ok. That makes sense!

    Oct 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    Thank you so much. You were right, the man had the heart of stone and the woman the heart of flesh. That is a great idea, to put in some ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Culture Re: Celebrate Mothers, Celebrate Life.

    I can see where you are coming from, but what if your mother was that 14 year old girl, and that unborn child was you. Would you still want her ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Culture Re: Celebrate Mothers, Celebrate Life.

    Thank you so much. You're right though, I did assume things about all mothers. It is just that I had not had any experience like your own. Thank you for ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: My Facade Broken

    I am just curious, what does "kevlar" mean? Your poem is very good... I think it would help to do "Now, you will finally end." It is just a personal ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Culture Re: Celebrate Mothers, Celebrate Life.

    Thank you so much! I knew abortion was wretched, and had its cold fingers stretched everywhere, but I had no idea that it was on such a big scale. It ...

    Oct 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Happiness

    Great job!

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: excavitat

    Ok, that makes more sense. I think with a few minor tweaks, you could really make something special of this!

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Seniors

    I think this would be a great thing to write on the dust-jacket of a book to grab the readers attention. Good job! This would make a good story!

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: excavitat

    Great job!

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    No problem! It has been a life saver for me! I also subscribed to dictionary.com's word of the day thing, and there are some fun new words to learn through ...

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deep Sea

    good job!

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Sea Goddess

    This is really great!

    Oct 1, 2014


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle