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Re: Insult to Injury Part Three (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
Alright, another short chapter! Not complaining about that, I'm a fan of shorter chapters in general, heheh. Wasn't expecting a time skip so soon, I expected we'd get the reaction ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Princess of Hades- chapter two
(Wow did you make that portrait yourself, thats pretty cool!) Overall, this chapter was really great. Your main character and the others you introduce are incredibly intriguing, and Lucy is ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Retribution
hello, my fellow tiger. I've got to say that I was drawn to read this from the description, and story-wise, you didn't disappoint. You've set the tone for quite an ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: No Romance: Chapter 14
hello. Having not read the other chapters in this novel, I didn't quite get what was going on story wise, but what I did enjoy here was the narration. When ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Princess of Hades- chapter one
hello, happy review day. You know, there are a lot of stories where someone is cheated on, but a story where the main character cheats, hm. And then, characters that ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The quiet girl chapter one
hello. Happy review day. Your grammar is very bad, and there are many spelling errors in your story. If your English isn't very good, I'd suggest you Google some free ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Core Cities Chapter 5
hello, happy review day. I'll be honest, I read this without reading any of the previous chapters, and had no idea what was going on whatsoever. So, I'll just point ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Plummet - Chapter 1
hello, happy review day. I like coming of age stories in general, and think this has a lot of potential. Your description and surroundings are really nice, and your main ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Insult to Injury Part Two (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
hello. Overall, I found this chapter really great. You portrayed the closeness of the family very well, and you avoid a problem with most fan-fiction where it's filled with references ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: deleted
hello, happy review day. I find your plot to be very enticing, and the fact that we don't know for sure whether or not she was actually the murder adds ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Ballroom fight
hello, happy review day. I'll be honest and tell you I didn't really enjoy this. It's not that I didn't understand what was going on, I got that two guys ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Belinda Cabbotry: Alter Number Three (PART 22)
hello, happy review day. I always enjoy a dark, dingy atmosphere like this story conveys, its always entertaining to traverse through. Got to say during my initial read of this, ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Insult to Injury Part One (Jigoku Shoujo The Saved and the Damned)
hello (again). So I see we're switching to a new character, okay. I guess I'm supposed to know what this anime is and already know who Jason is, so don't ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Prologue - Jigoku Shoujo: The Saved and the Damned
hello. I saw some other parts to this in the green room and decided to go back and read this one first ^^ Keep in mind even though this is ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1.3
hello, happy review day. I clicked this because the premise is genuinely pretty interesting, I've never heard anything about it before. Just on that, I'd ask you to keep going. ...
Nov 29, 2015
