thosethatgotaway

I like your poem :) the message is pretty simply put and short but I like just the worldly comparisons and just the message in general. What I get out ...

Just here for a small review don't worry :) I like your wordplay here :) I like how you kind of related the nature theme to how the mind thinks ...

I was kinda drawn to this work because of the title because i play a little and love the sound of the piano so good job there lol :P yet ...

I think its a really good start to the story and you shouldn't get rid of it. But i definitely think that you should make it longer or even into ...

I honestly don't have much to criticize because i really liked this poem a lot :) I like the flow i personally see in the poem and your descriptions, your ...

i really like how the words just kind of flow into each other, and by making this poem go together like that makes it even better and more enjoyable. Yes ...

I agree with @Dreamer84 that there should be more of a background and a little bit more information on it. Its a nice start to it but there should definitely ...

i really like this :) i can relate to this highly because that's what i do with writing as well. :) and like the last 2 lines "i don't really ...

hey here just for a review :) i just wanted to say that i like how different aspects of the day brought you different messages and the language you used ...

Hey!! its just me coming in to review. :) i just want to say i love the way you worded everything.the tone is a very upbeat idea. It was an ...

Hi its thosethatgotaway here :) i really like the concept. It really got me thinking. the grammar and sentence structure made it easier to read. you put good voice into ...

Hey i'm Kassie :) you commented on my poem and i replied back to you. I really like your poem as well. I like how you included the feelings into ...