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  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: Mocha Tea

    I'm going to be honest, you understood this song a whole lot more than I did while making it. And now that I think about it, you hit pretty spot ...

    Dec 8, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Regrets

    I have to admit, the space between "hooked" and "to" was not intended, that's where the page broke on my Google docs when writing and editing this lol Thank you ...

    Dec 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dear Favorite Ex Lover

    I thank you for writing this. This poem is an awfully sensitive one, and I know the topic is rough. It's been a few years since this poem was written, ...

    Dec 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dear Favorite Ex Lover

    You're pretty much on point. I had someone who committed. It's been several years since then. This poem was originally written about a month after to help organize my thoughts ...

    Dec 6, 2024
  • Short Story » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: May The Soul Find It's Love

    I thank you so much for reading and writing this. I thought that since Carmon is a character I lay a lot of stress over, then I should make something ...

    Dec 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Gold plated love

    This is so cute! I love it!

    Dec 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Sweet Cherry Blossom

    Thank you for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    Dec 4, 2024
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: We were here.

    I deleted this, because it sent it twice, and I didn't intend for that to happen. I'm so sorry

    Dec 3, 2024
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: We were here.

    Dec 3, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Regrets

    I love this. The way you dissected the story. And the way you review is so spot on! While, yes, I know I have plenty of room to improve my ...

    Dec 3, 2024
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Iced Latte

    Sounds like a plan! I'll let you know when I make one! I'll most likely have to play my guitar too, just for tempo and structure

    Dec 3, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Siren's Song

    Thank you for reading! Most of my poetry is broken up, and most of the inconsistent things you see are matters of how its formatted when I import my work ...

    Dec 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Siren's Song

    This means a lot to me. The poem itself was written based off of a series of true events in my life, but I like to compare things to organize ...

    Dec 2, 2024
  • Other » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Young love cannot be broken (or so it seems)

    This is cute. The way it's written is well, it describes how family on both parties think of the boy. It's cute, it is. I did see some grammar mistakes, ...

    Dec 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: six months too late, a lifetime too soon

    Also, welcome to YWS! It's such a warm community, I'm sure you'll love it here!

    Dec 2, 2024


I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights