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Re: Mocha Tea
I'm going to be honest, you understood this song a whole lot more than I did while making it. And now that I think about it, you hit pretty spot ...
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Re: Regrets
I have to admit, the space between "hooked" and "to" was not intended, that's where the page broke on my Google docs when writing and editing this lol Thank you ...
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Re: Dear Favorite Ex Lover
I thank you for writing this. This poem is an awfully sensitive one, and I know the topic is rough. It's been a few years since this poem was written, ...
Dec 6, 2024 -
Re: Dear Favorite Ex Lover
You're pretty much on point. I had someone who committed. It's been several years since then. This poem was originally written about a month after to help organize my thoughts ...
Dec 6, 2024 -
Re: May The Soul Find It's Love
I thank you so much for reading and writing this. I thought that since Carmon is a character I lay a lot of stress over, then I should make something ...
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Re: Gold plated love
This is so cute! I love it!
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Re: Sweet Cherry Blossom
Thank you for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Dec 4, 2024 -
Re: We were here.
I deleted this, because it sent it twice, and I didn't intend for that to happen. I'm so sorry
Dec 3, 2024 - Re: We were here. Dec 3, 2024
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Re: Regrets
I love this. The way you dissected the story. And the way you review is so spot on! While, yes, I know I have plenty of room to improve my ...
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Re: Iced Latte
Sounds like a plan! I'll let you know when I make one! I'll most likely have to play my guitar too, just for tempo and structure
Dec 3, 2024 -
Re: Siren's Song
Thank you for reading! Most of my poetry is broken up, and most of the inconsistent things you see are matters of how its formatted when I import my work ...
Dec 2, 2024 -
Re: Siren's Song
This means a lot to me. The poem itself was written based off of a series of true events in my life, but I like to compare things to organize ...
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Re: Young love cannot be broken (or so it seems)
This is cute. The way it's written is well, it describes how family on both parties think of the boy. It's cute, it is. I did see some grammar mistakes, ...
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Re: six months too late, a lifetime too soon
Also, welcome to YWS! It's such a warm community, I'm sure you'll love it here!
Dec 2, 2024
