thestorygirl

If your going to write a poem, you might as well take care to write the poem. I thought it lacked volume, potential, any other language except French and English, ...

Dang!! This is some heavy stuff. Definetly confusing, but still intreaging. Contrast light when darkness falls. Kind of confusing, but I get the message. The sun rest upon the sea, ...

What can I say? This was absolutely fabulous. The way this was written, there was just something about it, it was like poetry. The way it flowed, it was perfect ...

Yeah, I'm like you too. When I was in 1st grade I had read every Harry Potter book that was out at the time. Now I can read adult books ...

YAY!! First to reply!! I stood there, On cyberspace chat And watched you stepping back.... How can you step back on cyberspace? Again. And again and again and again. Sometimes ...

Well I personally LOVE SpongeBob He is cute and square and has a great fashion sense. Sweet-natured little yellow sponge, your He is sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!! Like cane sugar, but yellow. Yeah. ...

I am like an apple and you a knife. Good simile! You slide into me carefully, placing yourself delicately in me. This strikes me as odd, but I get the ...

The addiction is sweet I’ve heard it if not a thousand times, So many broken hearts, So many paper lies. And still I demand I push and I shove and ...

The trees have lost their green the trees have lost their leaves the wind blows cool again I feel young again. I don't like the whole two agains in one ...

As the sun melts below the horizon, and we say our last "goodnight", Why is goodnight in qoutes? I can't bear to turn my back until you're out of sight. ...

Hearts cold and faces frozen in anger, we threw ice at one another with our mouths. They were icicles of previously silent retributions and precious truths we had not dared ...

yes this is a common but easily unique topic. You expressed the feeling an emotions well. It was vague but just informant enough that it could be alluring, facinating, even ...

I see what you were going for but the wedding seems to rushed. For One, Peeta doesn't speak AT HIS OWN WEDDING! There isn't much emotion behind the characters. Yeah ...

Wow is probably the only word low enough to describe this. The highest word hasn't even been invented yet do I will invent it. The word is Fantabulisticatomicamazing . See ...

WOW. that was awsome. Really what death is like. I wouldn't know... ahheh... hehehe... hhmmmm... sorry I seriously dont know what death is like. Sorry I'm just odd and horribly ...