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Nice piece you've got here, really realistic. I have deja vu incidents quite often, n each time i wonder, is it me remembering or him(the me who might have done ...

Hello, i have a review for u. First i like your story, although i think you should revise it more, describe the scenes a little more. There are also some ...

Hello, nice piece you've got here, i like wizards n magic n stuff, damn thngz fill ma mind with imagination. You could work on interactions between characters though. Here you ...

Hello, @cow, ths is a facinating piece you've got here, i really wonder what your inspiration was! The begining was good, now that i've read the entire thing, at first ...

hi, @shadeflame, i was skimming by when i noticed the notification, tagging really comes in handy... i really like this series, today's chapter has been as thrilling as usual. now ...

Hello, couldn't help but read this ever thrilling adventure of a girl so determined to gain her composure even in situation next to death. I really liked the flow of ...

Hello, this is an interesting piece, i also want to find out about the voice and window. Jst a few corrections maybe; "sheryl woke to the sound of the smell ...

Hey, nice work you have hear. I like your creativity, your scenes are vividly styled. Just a few errors, i highly recomend previewing you chapters for mostly gramma errors. So, ...

Okay this is tense, i like this piece, there's some tension and so many questions prior to the next chapter. So i dnt read the first chapters bt i like ...

Hello there... It's morning these ends(jst rolled out of bed) so thats the greeting! Good morning! I see you've put faces to your outstanding characters, that's nice and the fact ...

This is great work, not that i wasn't looking but i have no correction to give, the first review was all you needed. I like the twist in this story, ...

Hello, some creativity you've got here. I like your story line, aliens and humans, but i think you were a little brief with the scenes. In this chapter you've introduced ...

I like this,it's the beginning of a potential saga, only that it went a little slow for me. I personally like your lead character, Laela, she's tough and bound to ...

I like the fact that this work has many possibilities. What is to be found at the island, why they keep asking about Tanya's family but its a little slow, ...

Okay i like your ending, for a moment i thought the narator war the angel, only to realise he's the devil, nice twist there. My fav. phrase is "why, the ...