theobliviousoracle

Hello. The poem I think is a shot at something greater but you've come only midway to the aim. It not only fails to engross me and bring the emotions ...

Well, this is an interesting piece you've got here. Its so short it could as well have been a haiku but whatever, let's get to the point. So, first of ...

I felt that you are telling a bit too much about what the characters are feeling. You are telling us that the tears came out of her eyes and she ...

Hello. Quite a few poems about life I see each and everyday. Each saying something different but if you look at the core of them all you'll see that they're ...

Hello. The first thing that comes to my head is that the sum of the contents here isn't the final poem. It looks as if two people were put up ...

Okay. This was not at all what I expected after reading the description and I have to tell you I was disappointed but then it happens all the time. This ...

You totally got to me. You know, sometimes I too remove my glasses and the world blurs into a melancholy of colors scattered without definite boundaries and it feels like ...

Okay, this is completely different from any love letter I've ever read in my life. I'm going to honest, I've never read anything other than poetry on YWS and the ...

This is so pretty and simple. I think you could have done a lot much better but the hurry in which it was written can clearly be seen the way ...

This poem really got to me and more than anything I found it interesting. I started reading and the first impression that I got was someone remembering their happy moments ...

Now this is a really sweet poem here. I liked the metaphor you used in the first stanza and how a promise grows with the children and that's just beautiful. ...

Hello. Superb work! That's all I can say. All of us dream about things in our childhoods but due to petty somehows and somethings most of us leave them behind ...