themanofstars

It was a good piece. I am gonna read the whole thing that you are gonna publish here. There were no grammatical mistakes and the sentence formation was good. The ...

Happy Review Day. The speech is all good with no major flaw and a bit of statistics and the history lessons which shows some really stupid ideas and theories.However i ...

The title was out of my understanding and the reason no one reviewed yet and its sad cause the work is good. Sorry to say but what you had in ...

Happy Review Day. The story is depressing (in a good way). I really liked the story. It was Different and new and opposite of what i expected. I thought it ...

Happy review day. I liked the character of the girl. Happy and lively. Zack was good.Really like people like him. Story was full of sarcasm which i liked. Tips that ...

Seriously that was some piece of work.I can't stop laughing.Really funny and a bit realistic. I am gonna recommend others to review it. Now the review, Very well written and ...

The story has strong base and hope. Some tips that can make it much better. You should avoid writing the character's personality as readers like to have their own thoughts ...

Although i am not a girl but still when i read i found many similarities and its a good personal experience that you have shared might give the others some ...

That was a good sonnet. A really well put one and the language was good but i feel that the language can be changed a bit and can make much ...

The story was good. Simple, normal and nicely put. The story wants you to believe in it. The main character Rachel has been really well put and the description is ...

The story is great. Its kind of original and that's impressive.The story was narrated correctly but you have to make it a bit more compelling as i had to tell ...

Best thing for a writer is criticism. I found the idea or the topic really good.I feel the same way actually. You can improve the way you have wrote, make ...