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hey, 'krazywriter'! It's been a while since I read your prologue to this. I thought this was very well-written. I liked your combination of clipped sentences vs. lengthy ones, and ...

Four lines... and my heart skipped a beat. Incredible! Tealessence, it seems you're new here (I'm pretty new, too), but I can already tell you deserve great success. Perhaps it's ...

pendr! I didn't know you posted this work here! I feel when you sent this to me privately I didn't take the time to explain how much I love and ...

hello, catherinem! firstly, I really like the title of this piece. might I suggest adding an extra space between it and the body or italicizing it? (unless it's part of ...

hello there... I've never reviewed lyrics before. So this should be interesting. I really wish I could hear the tune to this, because I absolutely love music. You should do ...

hey, WindSailor! I must admit, to begin with, I wasn't a fan of the rhymes and rhythms you used, it kind of lacked in tempo to me and I would ...

perfect! my favorite writings and books always come with that sense of warmth...it's hard to describe, but it's the type of writing that you want to read when curled up ...

this is very poetic and beautiful. the concept got lost a few times, but it was due to a great thing- awesome description and vocabulary! it captivated me the way ...

My dearest friend rissy, I am doing this for both our benefits. So I can receive review points and so you may gain publicity. (that's pretty much what this is ...

hey! so I honestly haven't read any other chapters of this, but it seems like a really good story! XD even though I didn't know half of what was happening. ...

cute little story! I was totally surprised by the ending and as I read it again I smiled at the thought of a little boy pretending on his way to ...

this runs deep into my soul because of my love for music! I agree with CreativelyWritten, I wish I could write this! I'm not even going to say a thing ...

wow...this is kind of a lot to take in. I like the word choice and, really, the vagueness of what's happening. It makes the reader THINK, which I can appreciate. ...

This is lovely! I never thought of the perks to writing fanfiction in that way. Now I don't feel so bad, as if I'm copying someone's works XD. I also ...

Hi Megan this is a really epic poem! Because I was sitting next to you as you wrote it, I know how quickly you can come up with such inspiration ...