theironnovelist

hmm..... I loove this poem to be completely honest XD. I think my favorite part of it is your visual additions-- they add life and, well, a way to visualize ...

Hey guurl. Good to see you starting another style! So you've got a great idea going. Not very original at this point, but I can't judge just yet! I trust ...

A very nice visual and creative explanation for haunting memories. From a standpoint of experience, this makes total sense. Good word choices, too. I love words like 'stagnant', 'cacophony' (I ...

:D yaaaaay you're doing a story! So, something about formatting that I personally find distracting and unnecessary are the periods separating paragraphs. But, hey, that's kinda your signature thing wi

I love the idea for this story :) I would have liked to know a bit more about your MC. But I understand the mystery. A few things that got ...

Yay, Skyrim!!!! I have found very few people on here so far who play yay! However...this is difficult to review, as it is straight plagiarism. They aren't your lyrics and ...

hi there, and welcome (a little late) to YWS! you can call me Iron and just call anytime you need anything :) [creepy smiley face] I can tell there's a ...

hai. my suggestions will be mostly general in, I'm not going to pick out certain sentences I want you to change. I feel that is not quite my position. I'm ...

yyusss I remember this one :) One of my favorites. I love some of your phrases. If I could change one thing I'd made this poem more mysterious at first. ...

hello Snazzy:) Wow! I LOVE this poem so much! Being a lover of silence myself, of course. You displayed it so perfectly. The rhyming and rhythm scheme was awesome, too! ...

hullo hullo hullo! I really like the deep, dark tone to this poem. I also like the way you formatted the stanzas, breaking them with periods with no other punctuation. ...

Hi Eveningstar! WELCOME TO YWS!! Lovely name by the way, and an even lovelier poem! As a lover of poetry, I can easily say this is one of my favorite ...

hey there, Tiwnseed! What a nice piece. It had a particularly powerful ending. It's a good size, too; enough description, but concise enough to get a good point through in ...

hey hi hello! I feel like I've been saying this all day...but I've never read the other chapters in this series and I'm so sorry and please forgive me this ...

hey there! If I'm not mistaken, I haven't read/reviewed any other chapters in this today's review will probably be mostly nitpicks. :( sorry about that. I kind of like how ...