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Re: Garden of Eden - Chapter 2: A Snake in the Garden
Hey RavenBlack! So I just read both chapters of this work and I have got to say that this story is beautifully written and very creative. The idea of a ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Thy Kingdom Come
Okay, I honestly LOVE this! It reminds me of something John Keats or other Romantic poets would write and that's beautiful! So much better than some other poetry I've read ...
Mar 15, 2018 -
Re: Two wolves
Hey! So I have to say that the story idea is full of potential and I think the characters are very compelling! However, the format of this story makes it ...
Mar 15, 2018 -
Re: I'll never be good enough...
Hello Emolemon! I wanna start off by saying that this poem is beautiful! I adore the imagery and the overall theme of the poem, it's honestly perfect! However, the first ...
Mar 15, 2018 -
Re: Dare to Anger
Howdy Hey CorruptedArrow, let me start by saying I love the idea of a young girl detective fighting back against bullying in a kind of sneaky and spy-like sort of ...
Feb 26, 2018 -
Re: once upon a time in havana part 1
Hello wetumberella5! I first would like to say that the concept of the story is very interesting and unique. I love the idea of a Cuban historical novel as most ...
Feb 19, 2018 -
Re: Prologue
Okay so first off Holly I f-ing LOVE this! It was so intense and kept me gripped the entire time! I always love a good fantasy what with kings, queens, ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: Narco
Hey FanofFates, first off I wanna say welcome to the site! This is a great first work to post and I loved it! I am here to offer my opinion ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: Anyone Can Kill
Hey Abhipsa! Just here to give my thoughts on your story! First I would like to say that I really, really enjoyed this. The descriptions are on point and the ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: The Saltiest Poem
Hey AliceAfternoon! I just want to start off this review by saying oh my gosh was your poem amazing. I loved everything about it and the feeling of rage and ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: A political poem
Hey Wonderfulpineapples9, I really liked your poem, I think you have a lot of talent, I only have a few suggestions. I felt as if this was very rushed and ...
Feb 20, 2018 -
Re: The Ice Dragon
Hey Fellstia! I really liked your poem, these days it's rare to come across a fantasy poem or something like that so I was really interested in it. The title ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: A Few Reasons Why: I'm not Religious
Hi HostofHorus *waves* I am here to just give you my thoughts on the poem which I loved by the way! I love how you showed the beginning of the ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: If My Life Were a Novel. . .
Hi ACM! I really love the idea of the poem. I like the idea of wondering if you are enough and wondering if you are interesting. I love the first ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: She Wore The Same Dress...
Hi EmbracetheSass! I love the premise of the story and was very intrigued by the great title that you have for your story! I love the first paragraph of the ...
Oct 12, 2015