thecolorofthesky

Hey Cas! I have a review for your lovely poem! I only have a few critiques. The first is more punctuation. Add periods at the end of your thoughts. With ...

Hey there! I'm here to review this piece of yours. As a fellow daughter of a law enforcement officer, I can feel where you are coming from. I have several ...

Hello there! I'm here to review this poem of yours! I'll start with critiques, then move on to the good elements. Critiques: Second line has a typo. "fairly" should be ...

Hello there lovely! I'm thecolorofthesky here to review. To start let me say that to me, this story seems like an inbetweener. By that I mean that it is neither ...

Hello lovely! I'm thecolorofthesky here to give thoughts on your poem! I love this piece. You use so many great elements. I do agree with the first review only in ...

Hey there! I'm here to review this amazing poem! Actually, it would make a good set of lyrics! You could definitely make it into a song if you wanted. Poem ...

Hello there! I must say, short poems that hit hard are my favorite. This is going to be a shorter review. To start, the use of the pronoun 'the' in ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! I'm here to review your lovely poem! In the description you explained that you were testing a new style of writing. I, personally, love ...

Hi there! It's thecolorofthesky with a review. Good Aspects: The bold font really emphasizes the big points of the poem. I think you could change the emphasis on "Tell me ...

Hi there! Nice poem! I just have a few critiques for you. To start, I would try to rework the second line. I think it would sound smoother if it ...

Hi there! I have a review for you. The title of your piece is perfect because right away, you separate you and the other person from the rest of the ...

Hey there! This is probably the best humor I've read on here so far. But to be fair I've only been here a few days. You did a wonderful job ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! (even though I'm new too). I'm going to be writing a review for you! To start you off I just have a few basics to ...

Hi there! I have a review for you. To start this poem is a lovely piece with great ideas. I think a little more punctuation would be nice. There were ...

Hey there! This is a great haiku! You manage to create a picture of a dim room with a jazz band and good food within such a short space. Your ...