This is a truly great poem and I enjoyed reading it. Your style, word choice and moments when you use imagery of the stars and galaxies are amazing.
"Do we pocket our stars in the grave? Do they decompose with time, their lights dimming with grime, or do they shine brighter in a locked coffin?"
I am in love with this part. Your wording and contrasting elements of stars and death go together so well. I seriously can't think of anything wrong with this poem. It's amazing, magical, packed full of emotion and uniquely your own.
"Time-bomb love." Is yet another great phrase in a poem that has so many.
You are a very talented writer and can express your feelings in such an original way. Love it.
Points: 11
Reviews: 22
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