the_red_gem

If you look at it it mirrors the "Ebb and Flow" of the title. Thank you.

Thank you very very much. I spent quite a few hours on it

Thanks guys. Just as a note: the lines "Scribbled notes / I grab my coat" are meant to sound disjointed to change the feel when she gives up... and the ...

Thanks so much Writersdomain, all your advice will help a lot while I'm trying to fix this up.

She's right you know. There's nothing to fix, I loved it.

*feels like running round and shouting "they like it, they really like it" but decides against it* Congratulations, being compared to Edgar Allen Poe has just made the highlight of ...

Thanks, The rhyming is horrible at the end, but yeah... I'lll fix it up eventually

hehe, see look I posted now, Anyway I loved it. 'Specially the reindeers and the mash-ed potatoes bit. Pure gold

I liked this one. I thought it got it's message across very clearly, Well Done :)

I think the entire random world shall always love cheese.. and icecubes

*sobs*.. beautiful, it's the only way I can describe it. I dont know much... but I know what I like and I liked this poem. Thankyou.

True that, True that

Oh and congratulations Supermal on your 50th post.

Oh my goodness. I'm reading that at the moment. Chapter 3-so dont give anything away. I like Isabea too.

Fair enough. Im not very good at writing poetry. Im hoping to get better.