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  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Just throwing away some cluttering thoughts.

    Thank you

    Oct 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Just throwing away some cluttering thoughts.

    Thank you for pointing out the "one's", I hadn't noticed it. I corrected it. Thank you, also, for your review.

    Oct 4, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom has reached its peak.

    Hey, thanks for your review. Like I mentioned on the other review, I had typed this out into stanzas, but they went away when I submitted it for whatever reason. ...

    Jul 7, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom has reached its peak.

    Hi there! Thank you for your review. I actually did have it in separate stanzas, but when I submitted it the format changed. I found it odd, but haven't bothered ...

    Jul 7, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Teenage Tale

    I loved the basic concept of this poem. It was well thought out, and creative. I understand that this is an actual form of poetry, and you've worked with it ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You know what?

    Thank you.

    Nov 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You know what?

    Thank you. And I'm dreadfully sorry you've been bullied in such a way. Hopefully you've been able to move past it.

    Nov 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was thinking yesterday.

    thank you

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was thinking yesterday.

    Thank you.

    Oct 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was thinking yesterday.

    Thank you.

    Oct 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Royal Injustice

    It started out in a wonderful way, but it began going down hill. The rhymes seemed to become more and more forced as the poem went on. There are a ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We the few.

    Thanks!

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Art » General, General Re: "Courage" - A Sketch

    How beautiful!

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A poem for Mother's Day

    Oh, I am most definitely sorry! I tried to make it long, but my review for it was simple. I liked it, I couldn't find anything of issue. If I ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Excrutiating Agony

    Honestly, dark poetry is the most beautiful you can come by! And I can't believe you asked her if she was okay! That's fantastic!!!

    Aug 29, 2014


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