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I love how the female figure in this poem, brings many forms of love to the table. She gives of a motherly love, and the love you'd get from a ...

If I didn't know any better, I'd think you stole this from Shakespeare. Lol. But seriously it's wonderfully crafted in the Shakespearean style and could easily pass for an original. ...

I think the bridge is my favorite part. "My thoughts are dark as the midnight sky. The clouds submerse and the oceans fly. The devil laughs and the angels cry. ...

Wow, just wow. I may have a difficult time explaining why this magnificent poem brought a tear to my eye. But non the less, I am going to try my ...

I like the style. Very simplistic, yet heart spoken in its own way. I do agree that it needs a little more, because it is difficult to understand, but it's ...

oh my goodness, this poem is so incredibly amazing, that i can't help but believe you stole it. That's not an accusation, that is a compliment. Other than very few ...

I really like this. It doesn't seem too childish, like something you'd read to a child. But it definitely seems like a great poem to read in class, and I ...

I had a hard time understanding this poem. It wasn't just the metaphors, it was also your grammar. I don't want to be THAT person, but there's quite a bit. ...

This poem reminds me of something Shel Silverstien would conjure up for us in one of his marvelous poetry books. Which leads me to believe that you may indeed have ...

Despite the many grammatical errors, I like this poem. It reminds me of the type of poem you would read in a children's book. Something about ghosts and laughter is ...