tgirly

Hello! This was a good poem. You do a really good job of encapsulating this moment. The poem is the perfect length and the image is really interesting and it's ...

Hello! There's a lot of emotion in the piece, and I love how you really delve deep into the different psychologies and justifications about the two different viewpoints about love, ...

Hello! I love this poem. I love poems with long lines when they're done right, and you really pulled it off well here. I love poems like this one, that ...

Hello! The nice thing about this poem is that it's very visual. it kind of reminds me when people build people or other images out of the dashes and swipes ...

Hello! This piece was tragically sad and it was so beautiful. You did a lot of things that I normally think are gimmicky, but they made sense in this poem ...

Hello! I appreciated how honest this essay seemed. The fact that you began by admitting that you felt you'd been a cyberbully was a really powerful way to begin the ...

Hello! I really like how matter of fact this poem is; I always think that such coolness of description gives an interesting spin to concepts like this that usually require ...

Hello, I think you do a really good job of commanding the different biblical references and symbols you incorporate into your poem here. I think you definitely have an understanding ...

Hello! In the description, you said you only wrote the poem in three minutes, so given that fact, this poem is really good. However, it does feel a bit like ...

Hello, Amelie! I was intrigued when I saw the Latin in your title. I've been taking a college level course in Latin this semester, and I appreciate that you even ...

I'm holding no punches since you have the all-clear to tear it to shreds. I think this has the potential to be very powerful. As it stands, there are points ...

I like this piece, and I can relate to the emotions expressed completely. I was very shy in middle school, and for me it was not swimming but the debate ...

I agree with the vast majority of alliyah's review, including the reply, but I would like to say that, even though I think the tiger imagery is disjointed compared to ...

The beginning seems really rushed; it doesn't read like a story but like a summary of one. I also am not sure who is being referred to when you talk ...

Hello! Congratulations; you're my 300th review! (No, you don't get a prize.) This a wonderful poem; very descriptive and very interesting. I like where you've broken the lines- the semi-irregular ...