tgham99

You tackle a myriad of intense emotions in this poem, which is undoubtedly your intention, so great job there. I will say that I found it a bit difficult to ...

Jumping in to leave a review! This is a very straightforward poem that is easy to follow, and I like your use of imagery; I feel like it sets a ...

This is a very powerful poem that tackles a message that unfortunately a lot of people can relate to. I'm not sure why but I love the fact that you ...

I love that this poem spans across different avenues of both closeness and loneliness; rather than focusing on either romantic relationships or platonic relationships, you combine the two and delve ...

Very powerful, intense poem. With just a few lines, you managed to convey all of the pain and intensity behind such a dramatic moment. I think you do a really ...

I like that this poem uses a lot of strong imagery and your consistent pattern of auditory imagery in particular makes this all the more effective. I like that you ...

You use a lot of strong/intense imagery in this poem, and though I got the general idea that the narrator is the martyr themselves, I will admit that I had ...

After reading @alliyah 's review I got a better idea of what kind of tone you were going for here, and it helped me understand the narration a little bit ...

This is a lovely short story that kept me engaged throughout the entirety of it. While I do think that the opening could be modified a bit to move away ...

I'll admit that I'm not someone who typically enjoys second person poems but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. I think you effectively convey a variety of emotions, though I ...

Very powerful poem. I enjoyed reading it mainly because you do a good job of capturing the concepts of deliberate ignorance and obliviousness that have plagued society over the years. ...

I like that this is a simple enough poem that you can follow along with the message easily, but not so simple that it's not telling a strong story. I ...

Hey there! I just left a reply to your welcome post so I figured I'd drop by and leave a review on your poem here :) I'll start off by ...

Love reading your chapters so I'm popping in for another review :) I feel like you did a lot better in terms of details and exposition with this installment. There ...

I love this poem so much because I feel like a lot of people can relate to having formed close ties to fictional characters, whether through literature of film. I ...