This is a great poem! I really love how haunting everything about it is, and how the narrator never draws too much attention to themselves. The character of the boy is very compelling to me, in particular. The narrator’s constant barrage of questions is an effective detail. You do a great job of establishing that the narrator wants to know more about the mysterious boy. The final line is an amazing ending to this piece. I love that you leave off on one final burning question about the boy. Overall, I’m really impressed!
Points: 174
Reviews: 17
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