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tgham99

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: ...

    Writing about characters writing? Yes please. But seriously, this was a good story and I like the way you introduced the fact that the narrator has never ventured out into ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dear Universe,

    This poem is worded so strongly that I literally feel like I'm the one who's suffering at the hands of the universe rather than the narrator themselves. Right off the ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Art » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Witches and Queens

    Omg, I just want to start this review by saying that this is most definitely art. I love the picture you painted of witches -- the comparison to Lucifer as ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: What made me who I am today?

    This is a very interesting prompt to address and I like that you went into such detail in regards to who you are and how your identity came to be. ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Essay on Dry Tortuga National Park

    Hey Lucy!! Tee here for a review. I typically only do peer reviews of essays in class so I apologize if this review isn't as helpful as I want it ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: tides of time

    Your voice is.. wow. I loved listening to it and the lyrics themselves are amazing as well which really ties everything together. 10/10 love it!! As for the lyrics themselves, ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: EPA

    This is a very interesting story that details the feeling of being torn between moving on and being held back by someone in our past. I think you do a ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Murder

    Hi there! Tee jumping in here for a review. This short story was super interesting for me to read because I always love stories that give us a look into ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Siempre

    Hi there! Jumping in for a review here. I was super excited to see a poem written in Spanish so I figured I would leave some feedback because it was ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Other » General, General Re: Characters for a Potential Story

    Some rambling notes in no particular order, so I apologize if it's super scatterbrained!! You mentioned wanting to couple up a couple of the characters, and right away I thought ...

    Jan 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: The Sheep and the Lion

    Hi there! Popping in for a review :) To start, I like the implementation of a rhyme scheme. It's a good way of keeping a steady rhythm flowing in the ...

    Jan 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: my little leo

    Before I review anything I just want to say that the picture literally ties this whole thing together and is almost enough to make me want my own kitten

    Jan 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Solo

    This is a very straightforward poem that really encompasses the painful feeling that accompanies the realization that "fate had other plans" for a relationship. I like the idea of using ...

    Jan 23, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Old Mr. Bell

    Ooh, this was a very interesting poem -- I like the supernatural aspect of it; the idea of seeing a ghost/the remnant of someone that's not really there is a ...

    Jan 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My princesses.

    You have a very good grasp of suspense -- the story kept me hooked all the way through to the end, and the plot twist right in the final lines ...

    Jan 23, 2020


“All stories are true," Skarpi said. "But this one really happened, if that's what you mean.”
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind