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Re: ...
Writing about characters writing? Yes please. But seriously, this was a good story and I like the way you introduced the fact that the narrator has never ventured out into ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Dear Universe,
This poem is worded so strongly that I literally feel like I'm the one who's suffering at the hands of the universe rather than the narrator themselves. Right off the ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Witches and Queens
Omg, I just want to start this review by saying that this is most definitely art. I love the picture you painted of witches -- the comparison to Lucifer as ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: What made me who I am today?
This is a very interesting prompt to address and I like that you went into such detail in regards to who you are and how your identity came to be. ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: My Essay on Dry Tortuga National Park
Hey Lucy!! Tee here for a review. I typically only do peer reviews of essays in class so I apologize if this review isn't as helpful as I want it ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: tides of time
Your voice is.. wow. I loved listening to it and the lyrics themselves are amazing as well which really ties everything together. 10/10 love it!! As for the lyrics themselves, ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: EPA
This is a very interesting story that details the feeling of being torn between moving on and being held back by someone in our past. I think you do a ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: The Murder
Hi there! Tee jumping in here for a review. This short story was super interesting for me to read because I always love stories that give us a look into ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Siempre
Hi there! Jumping in for a review here. I was super excited to see a poem written in Spanish so I figured I would leave some feedback because it was ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Characters for a Potential Story
Some rambling notes in no particular order, so I apologize if it's super scatterbrained!! You mentioned wanting to couple up a couple of the characters, and right away I thought ...
Jan 25, 2020 -
Re: The Sheep and the Lion
Hi there! Popping in for a review :) To start, I like the implementation of a rhyme scheme. It's a good way of keeping a steady rhythm flowing in the ...
Jan 25, 2020 -
Re: my little leo
Before I review anything I just want to say that the picture literally ties this whole thing together and is almost enough to make me want my own kitten
Jan 23, 2020 -
Re: Solo
This is a very straightforward poem that really encompasses the painful feeling that accompanies the realization that "fate had other plans" for a relationship. I like the idea of using ...
Jan 23, 2020 -
Re: Old Mr. Bell
Ooh, this was a very interesting poem -- I like the supernatural aspect of it; the idea of seeing a ghost/the remnant of someone that's not really there is a ...
Jan 23, 2020 -
Re: My princesses.
You have a very good grasp of suspense -- the story kept me hooked all the way through to the end, and the plot twist right in the final lines ...
Jan 23, 2020
