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I love it. I love the meaning behind it. The imagdry was astonishing to say the least. I have never thought about it like that and now I'll probably rememeber ...

All and all, I really like the idea. Personifying depression the way you did is rarley done. It orignal, it's new, it's fresh, it's pretty genius. It was soooo refreshing ...

Thanks! This is actually the second chapter, I just messed up posting it. If you want to read the first one, go onto my portfolio and find three days in ...

I loved this poem. Normally when people refernece other sayings in poems; it bothers me because its not orignal. You, are an exception. You made it your own and explanded ...

Very nice! I have never personally been addicted but I know addicts and yes this is close to their feelings.

I liked it very much. I am very patriotic, however you make some very good points. The thing I liked the most was how can we save others if we ...

Thank you for the review! It was really hard to keep ryhming, this is actualy the first peom I've written with a set ryhmne scheme so it was challenging. Thank ...

I liked how simple it was. Many writers complicate and describe too much or twoo litte, myself included, but you made it just descripitive enough. It'll most defiantly stick with ...

I know, the beginning is sort of confusing. He's like reliving it in his mind while he's trying to go to sleep. He's not saying he felt nothing while he ...

I don't understand what you were trying to say. Try fixing the structure to look like a poem, and being clearer. I really tried, I just don't get it. Sorry, ...

I liked it. It was very well written. However I don't understand what the monster is.

Thank you! I'll keep that in mind. Don't worry I am planning on explainning it in more detail later in the story. Thanks for the feedback:)

I liked it a lot. I think it showed how split our minds are. One day we're happy with ourselves and the next day we're the opposite. It's a great ...