tarameagan

I 100% love it. You did a great job. I love your end rhyme. It has just the right amount of emotion and it kept my attention which isnt eassy. ...

Wow , this is really good. I like the flow. Also it has great detail and as I read it , I created a mental image in my head of ...

Well for some one who don't write poetry you did a great job. I like this poem. its amazing. I like how you used nature in this. I love the ...

This is really good. I love playing in the rain and I'm 16. If i ever had to let go of that one childish thing i wouldn't be me. Anyhow, ...

This story was very good. I Think that the ending is amazing. It left me wondering about the naked soul and the bird Goldie what became of him.? I couldn't ...

Well , The one thing about this poem that stood out to me most was the last line "You made that decision yourself" I like this line alone because it ...

I love the flow. It just makes this poem sound professional, " Six black arms will grab you up Or, stalk you till you just give " This is my ...

i cant deside if " I take the knife and let it fly through the tree's and through the sky." is my favorte part or "The girl with crystal clear ...

"we thrive on her dread so sometimes for fun we like to get in her head and make her feel things so she will wish she were dead" i like ...

This is amazing!!..... I think the way you titled it "Me" was really cool. You are a great writer... i like reading it. i love the way you wrote it ...

I like it. I think it has great emotion in it and that's key to great poetry. Or at lest that's what i think. You got tremendous skills in writing. ...

Whoa , this is really good! you got some major talent . I love vampire story's there the best... The fact that a powerful vamp like the vampire lord didn't ...