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Re: Dead Sparks
It's gr8...keep up the good work!
Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:55 pm -
Re: The Apple
gr8 job....keep it up!
Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:51 pm -
Re: Memories
It's good....Keep up the good work!
Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:36 pm -
Re: When the world finally goes silent
It's good....Keep up the good work!
Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:34 pm -
Re: Beautiful, Dead Rose
It's good....Keep up the good work!
Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:32 pm -
Re: me without you
Its country pop!!...btw thnx for the help :-)
Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:34 pm -
Re: what do i do with myself?
Actually not perfect but good for a start......Keep working!
Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:13 am -
Re: Death Without View
that was gr8....i'de give that 9/10!!!
Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:13 am -
Re: Love
punctuation and everything isn't a big deal right now....cause u have a wonderful ,fantastic choice of words!!!the song has a deep meaning and i am sure that it could be ...
Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:12 pm -
Re: Song I Heard In A Dream
I adore it...its fantastic!
Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:08 pm -
Re: Wonder
its has a special meaning although its a comon category or theme!
Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:00 pm -
Re: With you =)
from my point of view that was good ,not perfect,but good!....there are some mistakes that u could easily edit so try just a little bit harder!
Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:55 pm -
Re: He Loves Me He Loves Me Not...
I loved it so much it's wonderful i really think that you could be a very creative auther
Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:55 pm -
Re: Floating
i really love you're poem its so wonderful and I actually couldn't find anything wrong to be corrected.
Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:50 pm -
Re: Goodnight
it was really great I think That if you just fixed some very little things you're poems would be totally amazing.I also like the way of expresing what you mean.
Mon Oct 05, 2009 4:47 pm