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tamtam97

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Dead Sparks

    It's gr8...keep up the good work!

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Apple

    gr8 job....keep it up!

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Memories

    It's good....Keep up the good work!

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: When the world finally goes silent

    It's good....Keep up the good work!

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Beautiful, Dead Rose

    It's good....Keep up the good work!

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: me without you

    Its country pop!!...btw thnx for the help :-)

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: what do i do with myself?

    Actually not perfect but good for a start......Keep working!

    Jul 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Death Without View

    that was gr8....i'de give that 9/10!!!

    Jul 17, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Love

    punctuation and everything isn't a big deal right now....cause u have a wonderful ,fantastic choice of words!!!the song has a deep meaning and i am sure that it could be ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Song I Heard In A Dream

    I adore it...its fantastic!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wonder

    its has a special meaning although its a comon category or theme!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: With you =)

    from my point of view that was good ,not perfect,but good!....there are some mistakes that u could easily edit so try just a little bit harder!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: He Loves Me He Loves Me Not...

    I loved it so much it's wonderful i really think that you could be a very creative auther

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Floating

    i really love you're poem its so wonderful and I actually couldn't find anything wrong to be corrected.

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Goodnight

    it was really great I think That if you just fixed some very little things you're poems would be totally amazing.I also like the way of expresing what you mean.

    Oct 5, 2009


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