swampperson

Perfect!!!!! Wonderful!!!! I love this, but think the meaning could be clearer. Is it about the government and economy? Is it about family? I don't get it. But other then ...

Cool! I like the philosophy behind this, even if it was not intentional. I also like that you can read it in a short time, but that it isn't impossible ...

I like this, and how you explain and use imagery. I can't find much not to like about it,even. You tell us feelings, and show the difference once one person ...

I love this poem, as well as the meaning behind it. Plus, you're lucky to be able to write poems this easily. But, of course, I have a few nitpicks ...

OK, this is good. No, Great. The only thing that I kind of have a problem with is that it doesn't end. "This particular shelf" does not end the poem, ...

I Overall like this, but I do have a few nitpicks. First of all, "She was a broken light amongst a field of lamps" First lamps needs to be capitalized ...

OK, this is good. I can like it. But, of course, like every writer in the known world, you made some mistakes. But, over all this is pretty well done. ...

Well, this is good, but,as you know, you aren't always the best with spelling, and you made a few mistakes here. I love this piece, but it needs capitalization and ...

This is good. I like it. You did name some of the qualities of each house. Also, it makes me sad to read this and realize how much I miss ...

Well, this is good, and has everything necessary in it. I'm not a poetry expert, but still think its good. You used rhymes, meter, and everything else needed for a ...

Hey. This was interesting, and different. However, and I hope you don't think I don't like it by this, but I have a few issues with this story. First, " ...