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stygianmoon17

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 1.1

    Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D This is the first chapter of a story that looks oh so promising, I can’t wait to read what comes after !! ...

    Feb 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Literature Re: monsters

    Heyy, stygianmoon17 here for a review

    Feb 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Example Poem #1

    I was gonna comment on the title and how it just makes you seem either insanely lazy and just a I-don't-give-a-shit-about-my-poem feel to this or insanely creative. And then I ...

    Feb 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Brave

    Hey there, @stygianmoon17 here for a review :) First things first, wow. This poem is absolutely awesome !! just the energy behind it, the motivation, I totally see someone reading ...

    Feb 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: lovelines

    hey there ! stygianmoon17 here for a review :P Let's jump in the grammar first, I didn't see any typos, there's just this one sentence that didn't make much sense ...

    Feb 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: Cortez Shivick( Chapter 1)

    Heyyy, here for a review ! I looooved your short story, I was kinda taken aback by the length and I was just so discouraged I nearly clicked off, but ...

    Feb 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: Normal

    This is just absolutely fantastically unordinarily awesome !! it's a shame it might be the end of it, and quite frankly, I'm surprised no one commented on this. It's just ...

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Night Apperentice- chapter 1

    Heyyy, here for a review :) ❌❌❌ MINUSES ❌❌❌ I think there are just two major problems in this story- although, since I didn't read the first chapters I most ...

    Jan 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: earl grey tea with a dash of honey

    woooow you just posted this two minutes ago :P I'm early for once lol, Anyways- on to the review ❌❌❌ MINUSES ❌❌❌ The punctuation. The moments where that is the ...

    Jan 13, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: lost in the waves

    Woooow that frame. It’s so creative and original at the same time, and it gives off such nature vibes it’s awesome. The poem is short, and yet each line is ...

    Jan 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    Woooow this poem is incredible ! It's infinitely poetic and absolutely beautiful.. I love it !! ✅✅✅ PLUSES ✅✅✅ The rhythm, the flow, the rhymes- EVERYTHING, it's just so touching. ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you believe in the power of new beginnings

    hey, stygianmoon for a review :P What am I to say about this.. it's simple, it's effective- there's not much to say. There also is this little touch of melancholy ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Other » Review, Other Re: Anime And Animated Reviews

    I see you like writing reviews xD From game Of Thrones to this.. you've come a long way. Anyways, on to the review :P I'm not a huge fan of ...

    Jan 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Another S***** Day

    Hi, sorry but I have to reply to this xD I'm not sure if this is supposed to be from your, your OC, (or MC's) diary- but this is great ...

    Jan 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Politics Re: Dead or Alive - Part Ten

    This is amazing !! Ok I'm kinda new here, so I didn't check your first chapters yet. To be honest, this is the first chapter I've read from your whole ...

    Jan 6, 2021


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