starlitmind

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I hope you are liking it so far :) This is a really cute story! The title was intriguing; I wasn't sure what to expect ...

Hey there! This is a really cool story! I love the idea you have going on here. The storyline is really nice, and I like how the waves were personified ...

Hey there! Aw, this is a cute and sweet poem! I'm sure your family would enjoy reading this :) I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem. I'd like to point ...

Hey there! I love the subject of the poem. I like how you incorporated the tale of Icarus into it; it's what captured my attention and brought me to read ...

Hey there! This is a nice poem! Your title asked a question, and that's what caught my attention, because I wanted to know what the answer was. Your line length ...

Hey there! This is quite an interesting poem. I love the things you chose to talk about, the dark room, attic, and corner bookshelf. I really enjoyed reading this poem! ...

Again you've shown that you are capable of such beautiful imagery! This was a lovely read, and the descriptions are wonderful. I can really depict images in my mind. You ...

Hey there! :) This is a lovely poem. I like the idea of tied wings; it was what brought me to read your poem in the first place. I have ...

Hey there! You've managed to write another beautiful poem. I've noticed you are pretty consistent in the format of your poems - stanzas of four lines each. It makes it ...

Hey there! I really, really like this poem. You use such beautiful imagery and comparisons. Although all of your stanzas are beautiful, my favourite has to be the third one. ...

Hey there! I love the subject of this poem! I've never read a poem like this before. I like how you made something as ordinary as Goodwill and made it ...

Hey there! This is a nice and interesting poem! I like how you added second person to engage the reader in the poem. I have a few things I'd like ...

Hey there! I really love this poem. It's such a lovely way to portray being let down with a dress. I like the way you at first gave a dress ...

Hey there! As everyone has said before, this is an amazing story! Your plot is so unique, and your title is intriguing, along with your first couple of lines, which ...

Hey there! This is an interesting poem. I like the topic of the poem; it's what drew me in. You have a pretty unique poem, and I really enjoyed reading ...