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Re: A Spark of Hope
Hey there! I thought I'd give this a review since it has less than two :D This is a really well written story. You use great descriptions, and the emotions ...
Jul 20, 2020 -
Re: word salad
Hey there! This is a pretty old poem, but here I am c: I think you have some really unique metaphors and comparisons. The whole topic of this poem is ...
Jul 19, 2020 -
Re: I Love You Poem (1)
Hey there! I know this poem is super old, but it has only one review, so I decided to review it anyway! You have some nice imagery in your poem! ...
Jul 23, 2020 -
Re: i cant think of a name for this poem
Hey there! I know this piece is pretty old, but I feel bad that it has no reviews, so I decided to give it one! I like this poem! It ...
Jul 18, 2020 -
Re: From the Pocket
Hey there! I love this story. It's quite unique, as you've told the story from a ring's point of view. I love reading stories done from an object's perceptive. You ...
Jul 17, 2020 -
Re: Chapter #2
Hey there, Prim Rose! :D I haven't read the first part, but I thought I'd go ahead and review this chapter. I really like this chapter! I'm now thinking of ...
Jul 16, 2020 -
Re: Spinster
Hey there! I really love this poem. Like the others have said, I haven't read the word "spinster" in awhile, so your poem felt very unique and new. Your rhymes ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: Friends Throughout Time 1/?
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! :D I hope you're enjoying it so far. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! I love the concept of your story. Time ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Purple Haze -1
Hey there! First off, welcome to YWS! :D I hope you are enjoying it so far! If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask. I think this is ...
Jul 13, 2020 -
Re: .
Hey there! This is a really cute poem! It's light and fun and very enjoyable to read. I love poems about nature/seasons, and I think you did a really good ...
Jul 12, 2020 -
Re: How does it feel to lose someone?
Hey there! First of all, late welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying it so far :D This is a lovely poem. You had some great lines talking about ...
Jul 11, 2020 -
Re: Travelling by book. Part1
Hey there! I really like the idea behind this story. It's a cool idea, and I'm excited to see where you'll take it. You had some nice descriptions in places, ...
Jul 10, 2020 -
Re: Memories and Ashes
Hey there! This is quite an interesting story. What I've realized through reading this is that you're very good at descriptions! Your words painted a vivd picture in my mind, ...
Jul 9, 2020 -
Re: Accept Me
Hey there, welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying it here :D If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask! This is a great poem and includes ...
Jul 8, 2020 -
Re: Writers
Hey there! I really like this poem :D It's a nice topic you show, and you did a good job of explaining what a writer does and writes about. It ...
Jul 7, 2020
