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  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Spark of Hope

    Hey there! I thought I'd give this a review since it has less than two :D This is a really well written story. You use great descriptions, and the emotions ...

    Jul 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: word salad

    Hey there! This is a pretty old poem, but here I am c: I think you have some really unique metaphors and comparisons. The whole topic of this poem is ...

    Jul 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Love You Poem (1)

    Hey there! I know this poem is super old, but it has only one review, so I decided to review it anyway! You have some nice imagery in your poem! ...

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i cant think of a name for this poem

    Hey there! I know this piece is pretty old, but I feel bad that it has no reviews, so I decided to give it one! I like this poem! It ...

    Jul 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: From the Pocket

    Hey there! I love this story. It's quite unique, as you've told the story from a ring's point of view. I love reading stories done from an object's perceptive. You ...

    Jul 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Chapter #2

    Hey there, Prim Rose! :D I haven't read the first part, but I thought I'd go ahead and review this chapter. I really like this chapter! I'm now thinking of ...

    Jul 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Spinster

    Hey there! I really love this poem. Like the others have said, I haven't read the word "spinster" in awhile, so your poem felt very unique and new. Your rhymes ...

    Jul 15, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Friends Throughout Time 1/?

    Hey there! Welcome to YWS! :D I hope you're enjoying it so far. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! I love the concept of your story. Time ...

    Jul 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Purple Haze -1

    Hey there! First off, welcome to YWS! :D I hope you are enjoying it so far! If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask. I think this is ...

    Jul 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: .

    Hey there! This is a really cute poem! It's light and fun and very enjoyable to read. I love poems about nature/seasons, and I think you did a really good ...

    Jul 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: How does it feel to lose someone?

    Hey there! First of all, late welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying it so far :D This is a lovely poem. You had some great lines talking about ...

    Jul 11, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Travelling by book. Part1

    Hey there! I really like the idea behind this story. It's a cool idea, and I'm excited to see where you'll take it. You had some nice descriptions in places, ...

    Jul 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Memories and Ashes

    Hey there! This is quite an interesting story. What I've realized through reading this is that you're very good at descriptions! Your words painted a vivd picture in my mind, ...

    Jul 9, 2020
  • Art » Realistic, General Re: Accept Me

    Hey there, welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying it here :D If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask! This is a great poem and includes ...

    Jul 8, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Writers

    Hey there! I really like this poem :D It's a nice topic you show, and you did a good job of explaining what a writer does and writes about. It ...

    Jul 7, 2020


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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