I can empathise with the loss depicted in this poem, I understand what it means to have someone by your side and all of a sudden the person disappears. The poem doesn't rhyme but this is a piece that doesn't need to, the brevity is amazing and I think it shows our human emotions. The ending is very nice and makes the poem solid, I like your metaphors and your description.
Don't stop writing.
Points: 70
Reviews: 14
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