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Hello! I really enjoyed reading this poem. If this is based off of personal experience, then I'm sorry this happened to you. Online friends can be nice but can turn ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! We are so glad that you're here, and we hope you are, too. I found this work very interesting, as I have never really seen ...

Hello! I enjoyed this poem a lot. It was powerful, addressing how girls realize that their expectations of a relationship are "unrealistic," and, much to their disappointment, are not straight ...

Hello! I see that you're new to YWS--welcome! This is the perfect place for you to express your creativity. We're so happy that you're here. I found this very interesting. ...

Hello! I loved the humor in this story. It was overflowing with optimism and it made me smile. "'Roar. I am the Evil Darkness, eater of hope and joy, and ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! I see that you probably got inspired by the recent holiday. I'm not familiar with the song, but I think you used it well in ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading this poem. There's a great deal of emotion in here, and I like the rhyming scheme. "Was afraid and shy/But never I did cry": I think ...

Hello! I really like this poem! 1. "burning and melting her floral heart all at once." When something burns, it melts at some point. That's why I'm not too much ...

Hello! I liked your poem. I think it had a lot of meaning. I just have a few things to point out, and I hope you can benefit from the ...

Hello! I really enjoyed your poem. Kudos on making a good rhyming scheme! "perhaps you will go away and now pray" I personally believe that the word "now" is not ...

Hello! I read the first part of this, and I find both parts to be very interesting and full of potential. 1. "A metal tang drifts about her: She knows ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I found the layout very interesting, as well as the subject of the poem. 1. "bAcK aNd FoRtH oUr LiTtLe GaMe GoEs/FoR ReD bLoOd JuSt ...

Hello! I enjoyed your poem. I liked how descriptive it was. However, I have to criticize some parts. "I smile to look,/at my loving," I did not understand these lines. ...

Hello! You said you're not really sure what this means in the description, so maybe I can explain what I think it means, along with a review! By saying you ...

Hello! I really like "fragile feathers— at the mercy of a gust of breath or wind for a fleeting chance at life" I think it's just a beautiful description of ...