Hullo!!Here to review this rhythmic piece.I really liked this poem.I haven't heard the song but this is very good.Even though America is not my country but i could clearly feel the emtions of love and patriotism in this poem.I really liked the way you used he for the country and the country was narrating the whole poem. It gave a certain charm to the overall effect.In the first stanza you used Young child which is pretty awesome cuz that portrayed a sense that as America had gotten freedom its like getting a new life so he was young.You pretty much summed up the terrors of colonialism in this poem.Hope to read more from you
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