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Hello! spectator here to review your story! First let me point out a few wording choices: 1. At parts this story gets a little repetitive... For example in the first ...

Hello, I'm spectator and I'll be your tour guide this afternoon. Or maybe I'll review your short story or something. The biggest thing that sticks out to me is the ...

Hey-oh! I'm reviewing your poem! So, nice poem! I like it! Now, let's talk about imagery. I enjoy the rose imagery a lot. Obviously it's relevant to the story of ...

hi, i'm here to review! this was an awesome poem and i haven't reviewed in a while, but i love lists, so there will be lots of listing. coOl imagery: ...

Hello! Just dropping by for (only my second revmo) review!! I really enjoyed reading this short story and I have minimal criticisms for you!! I didn't catch any spelling or ...

Hello, spectator here to review your poem! This will probably end up being a shortish review since this poem is rather short, and self explanatory. First, the technicalities: 1. "Eight ...

hey, spectator here to review your poem since it's review day after all! first off, i wouldn't call this poetry, although if you want it to be i think that ...

Hey, herbgirl!I'm here to review your poem! Woo hoo!!! My first reaction was simply "wow"! This is a really amazing poem. You said so much, in a simple way and ...

Hello! I'm spectator and I'm going to review your poem. Now, normally I dislike poetry that rhymes. I find that rhyming can be very restrictive to the message a poet ...

Hey, there! It's spectator and (you guessed it) I'm here to review your short story! The first thing that drew me to this work was the title. I love lowercase ...

Oh, Hello!! It’s spectator here, to review your poem. And also to welcome you to YWS!! Woo Hoo!! For the most part I review (and write poetry) so I thought ...

Hey, it is spectator!! I'm reviewing your poem? I'm reviewing your poem!! I AM reviewing your poem!!! Now, isn't that exciting?? First off, this poem is freaking amazing!!! I love ...

Hey, it's spectator. I'm reviewing your poem? How fun! So, overall amazing poem - I really enjoyed it. I just have a few suggestions, feel free to do whatever with ...

Hey, it's Summer, dropping in for a review!! Apologies if this critique is short, but so is your poem :) Overall, this poem was enjoyable. Mainly I would suggest elaborating ...

Hello - Summer, here reminding you to eat your daily dose of watermelon (and maybe reviewing your poem too). Overall, awesome work!!! I agree completely with the message of your ...