speakerskat

thanks but again I wrote this when I was ten. You mean stanza not spanza.

Hey I really apperciate all these reviews, just a tip to keep you out of toile though....try not to copy and paste too much of the persons work into the ...

My lovely works...? You're picking all my old awful ones to review haha. I wrote some of these when I was ten...

Sorry this wasn't so good, it's rather old. I was about 10 when I wrote this.

Capitalization is also the poets stylistic choice. Sorry that this poem sucks it's rather old.

Hello! Thank you for the review however punctuation is a stylistic choice.

It's actually also a stylistic choice.

Punctuation and capitalization are stylistic devices and are not set in stone, no poem is ever too short.

Sorry not sorry but I'm going to tear you apart. Better posts? I've been writing for over 6 years and at least I know that you don't need to fill ...

I am not at liberty to alter this piece as it is not mine but thank you for the suggestion I agree whole heartedly as well, I would not have ...

It is not mine and I write much better than this, it's just something a friend of mine wanted me to put up and I thought it was nice. But ...

It was just a text I got from someone that they wanted me to put in poem format and post. I resent that slightly as I have personally written some ...

Yes let's just totally mutilate my rough draft and offer nothing but negitave comments about my story. I never said it was fiction...

Oh

It is a non-fiction story so I guess it wasn't as impactful as I would have liked it to be. Was it confusing at all? What about tenses? I will ...