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Re: The Intricate Line
Ya, I struggel finding the fine line between to many words and imagrey and oroginally, this wasn't a poem at all XD
May 30, 2013 -
Re: You'll never read this.
haha I was like "Oh yes I will read this!" Then I read it and got the title, very good!
May 27, 2013 -
Re: Hollow
aww thanks
May 27, 2013 -
Re: Hollow
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May 27, 2013 -
Re: Future Sky
Yes thank you... I love going back and fixing my poetry after I get comments like this. I did so after Kaylyn commented on my poem goofy and people seem ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: I'm a Poet
It's actually a rap... it was just for some fun when I was bored....It's not a satire intentionally XD I like the second stanza and agree the wal mart line ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Questions
YA!
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Goofy
I edited it, What do you think now?
May 25, 2013 -
Re: Inquisitive
It's not a word ;)
May 23, 2013 -
Re: Inquisitive
Ya I think I'm rushinf for review day XD once again I'm not totally sure
May 23, 2013 -
Re: Paper Mate
ya it isn't one of my better ones...the test was really long so I think it killed my brain lol XD I really have no idea if I was talking ...
May 23, 2013 -
Re: Wooden Spears
Oh thanks! Sadly though I'm not sure when I will get around to chapter three... I will try though.
May 23, 2013 -
Re: Window
Thanks!
May 23, 2013 -
Re: Window
Hi, thanks! I've written tons! my friends at school like this one, "Flowerpetals", "Lost in Love", and "Innocence" best though. I wrote two I haven't posted yet.
May 23, 2013 -
Re: Lost in Love
Hey I actually wrote two free verses on here. "Free verse" was a fail so don't bother looking at it. But my poem "Flowerpetals" seems to be a nice favorite ...
May 23, 2013
