Hello there ! Speakerskat here to review for the Tsunami Tyrants!
Man these poems just keep getting better! That was DEEP and very thought provoking...my life seems to have ton of mistakes. Treating people wrong,judging, acting negativley and not taking the time to truly enjoy the fruits of life, I know I'm going to die but you put in a good point. We know about people dying like Martain Luther King JR. and JFK or maybe our dog or grandpa ( ) but we jut pity and miss and mourn them. We never stop and think "That will be me someday, will I have truly lived?"
"Did I do my best?
Did I try my hardest?
And did I truly die?"
"Brother against brother in
This sinful world
But this world
Won’t repair but fade away."
I sometimes feel like I hold my friends back "Brother against brother" and often quetion myself asking what would I do when the time came for me to make a hard choiece for my friends and I say of course I would save them but... I guess you never know until you know. And the part about fading away really describes our current worldwide situation. civil wars, recessions, and just everyday fading of trusts and frendships that had looked like they could stand the tests of time. Really makes me sad...
I LOVED your poem!
Keep it up
Speakerskat
Points: 431
Reviews: 305
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