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Hey there! Speakerskat here to review for the Tisunami Tyrants! Grammer: Be sure to capitalize the first letter in the first word of each line! colour is actually spelled color ...

Hey there! Speakerskat here to write a review for Tisunami Tyrants! Almost flawless rhyme scheme! I DID NOT like how you switched your pattern for the last two stanza's, that ...

Hey there, Speakerskat here to review for you and the Tisunami Tyrants! VOCABULARY ! YOU are my vocabulary hero! Trepidation, psyche, and stoichiometry (I don't know what the last word ...

Hey Fortis, Speakerskat here for a review ! Tisunami Tyrants! I love how you repeated "I have a story to tell" in the first and last lines of the poem, ...

Hey Speakerskat here to review your lovely piece! Tisunami Tyrants So "You entrusted me with everything, Even, your very essence. Tethered to each other by heartstrings, We shared a bond ...

Aw thanks so much ;') I'm so glad we are friends! I'm here for you too! I can definatley personally pull meaning from this and I understand what you are ...

I can honestly say I have never seen this type of writing. Interesting. So I don't really know if there are or arn't any punctuation errors in here XD What ...

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Oh my um your rhyme scheme was.... very disproportionate....you switched patterns a lot, you should always try to keep that constant. As far as punctuation, try to capitalize each line ...

Just cahnge thi "Grey skies stare me in the eyes" to "eye", it will sound and flow better. I liked it but it had no periods or comma's therefore making ...

Really good! I alo like how you talked about the eye! People's eyes really do describe a lot about them =D "The eye truly is a wonderful thing. A pupil, ...

edit "Sitting in quiet, Wondering why must I change? My hair, my eyes, every part of my body, Just for you? Change, such a strong word, A word I never ...

Wow that was really deep,profound, and meaningful! I love the constant comparison throughout the whole of the poem, very nice. It wasn't to strained or ruhed or to (excuse spelling) ...

Eeek ! Sounds like "A Tousand Years" By Kristina Peri! NIIIIICCCCCEEEEEE! "I’ll admit I am scared I’ll admit that I want to say no I’ll admit that it’s hard for ...

Nice, it was simple,sweet, and to the point. I loved how you used carpet in this poem. I don't know, I found that really unique for some reason... I would ...