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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hidden in the Closet

    Well, this is quite different. I love different! For me, a poem is a better poem if it reminds me nothing of what a poem should look like. Honestly, a ...

    Oct 30, 2012
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: To My Future Daughter

    Wow, this is amazing! Being my fathers daughter, I can only say that I would love to have had my dad write me something like this. Being a previous cutter, ...

    Oct 13, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: control freak

    This is a miraculously powerful piece. I can relate to it more than words can describe, can I ask, is it about you? I know thats a personal question and ...

    Sep 18, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re:

    Ah you have to use this in creative writing some way shape or form! I want that kiss The one with the crescendo. Great opening! That happens at the end ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter's love.

    Wow… Sorry, I was speechless for a second… But I’m back now— Okay…here we go Wow, this poem is amazing! I mean it. I read the bold first and then ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Sea of Snow

    Hey! SnowBerry here :D Your comments always make my day, so I decided that I should send a comment your way. So, Here I go— I loved this piece!!! I ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Bella...

    Wow, I love this poem...I am not kidding, your voice just jumped out of my laptop screen and brushed against my heart. I do have a few ideas for you, ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: pavements

    Wow, I have so much to say about this piece!!! first off, amazing....just amazing. I have much more to say than that so here I go :D A/N: Cheers. I ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Atmospheric Soup

    Hey there! Wow--what a poem...hold on, give me a minute to pull my mouth off the floor--Your writing was just that good. OKay--okay--enough with the compliments--let me get to the ...

    Nov 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Blowing Flames

    Hi guys. This is for PenguinAttack's contest. Reviews will be very appreciated. Thanks

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart

    Well, what a way to write a piece. You know, I always find it interesting when people approach any form of writing, especially poetry, in a very unique way. I ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To Mom

    Wow, what a way to make an entrance here at YWS! Let me start off by saying I loved this poem, although, I’m sure based on the 27 likes that ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Words are Silent

    Wow, this is wonderful. No, not wonderful… After spending ten minutes checking through all the synonyms to that words all I can seem to say is, that piece, you piece, ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That Night

    Okay… Let me start off by explaining how much I love poetry. I will sit and read George Orwell’s poetry on a Saturday night, I do have a life but ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Raining

    Okay, let me start off by informing you that I love rain. I have painted it, photographed it, written about it and most importantly, danced in it. Just so you ...

    Sep 25, 2011


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