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Re: Hidden in the Closet
Well, this is quite different. I love different! For me, a poem is a better poem if it reminds me nothing of what a poem should look like. Honestly, a ...
Oct 30, 2012 -
Re: To My Future Daughter
Wow, this is amazing! Being my fathers daughter, I can only say that I would love to have had my dad write me something like this. Being a previous cutter, ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: control freak
This is a miraculously powerful piece. I can relate to it more than words can describe, can I ask, is it about you? I know thats a personal question and ...
Sep 18, 2012 -
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Ah you have to use this in creative writing some way shape or form! I want that kiss The one with the crescendo. Great opening! That happens at the end ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Winter's love.
Wow… Sorry, I was speechless for a second… But I’m back now— Okay…here we go Wow, this poem is amazing! I mean it. I read the bold first and then ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Sea of Snow
Hey! SnowBerry here :D Your comments always make my day, so I decided that I should send a comment your way. So, Here I go— I loved this piece!!! I ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Dear Bella...
Wow, I love this poem...I am not kidding, your voice just jumped out of my laptop screen and brushed against my heart. I do have a few ideas for you, ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: pavements
Wow, I have so much to say about this piece!!! first off, amazing....just amazing. I have much more to say than that so here I go :D A/N: Cheers. I ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Atmospheric Soup
Hey there! Wow--what a poem...hold on, give me a minute to pull my mouth off the floor--Your writing was just that good. OKay--okay--enough with the compliments--let me get to the ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Blowing Flames
Hi guys. This is for PenguinAttack's contest. Reviews will be very appreciated. Thanks
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart
Well, what a way to write a piece. You know, I always find it interesting when people approach any form of writing, especially poetry, in a very unique way. I ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: To Mom
Wow, what a way to make an entrance here at YWS! Let me start off by saying I loved this poem, although, I’m sure based on the 27 likes that ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: My Words are Silent
Wow, this is wonderful. No, not wonderful… After spending ten minutes checking through all the synonyms to that words all I can seem to say is, that piece, you piece, ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: That Night
Okay… Let me start off by explaining how much I love poetry. I will sit and read George Orwell’s poetry on a Saturday night, I do have a life but ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Raining
Okay, let me start off by informing you that I love rain. I have painted it, photographed it, written about it and most importantly, danced in it. Just so you ...
Sep 25, 2011
