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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hidden in the Closet

    Well, this is quite different. I love different! For me, a poem is a better poem if it reminds me nothing of what a poem should look like. Honestly, a ...

    Oct 30, 2012
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: To My Future Daughter

    Wow, this is amazing! Being my fathers daughter, I can only say that I would love to have had my dad write me something like this. Being a previous cutter, ...

    Oct 13, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: control freak

    This is a miraculously powerful piece. I can relate to it more than words can describe, can I ask, is it about you? I know thats a personal question and ...

    Sep 18, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re:

    Ah you have to use this in creative writing some way shape or form! I want that kiss The one with the crescendo. Great opening! That happens at the end ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter's love.

    Wow… Sorry, I was speechless for a second… But I’m back now— Okay…here we go Wow, this poem is amazing! I mean it. I read the bold first and then ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Sea of Snow

    Hey! SnowBerry here :D Your comments always make my day, so I decided that I should send a comment your way. So, Here I go— I loved this piece!!! I ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Bella...

    Wow, I love this poem...I am not kidding, your voice just jumped out of my laptop screen and brushed against my heart. I do have a few ideas for you, ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: pavements

    Wow, I have so much to say about this piece!!! first off, amazing....just amazing. I have much more to say than that so here I go :D A/N: Cheers. I ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Atmospheric Soup

    Hey there! Wow--what a poem...hold on, give me a minute to pull my mouth off the floor--Your writing was just that good. OKay--okay--enough with the compliments--let me get to the ...

    Nov 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Blowing Flames

    Hi guys. This is for PenguinAttack's contest. Reviews will be very appreciated. Thanks

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart

    Well, what a way to write a piece. You know, I always find it interesting when people approach any form of writing, especially poetry, in a very unique way. I ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To Mom

    Wow, what a way to make an entrance here at YWS! Let me start off by saying I loved this poem, although, I’m sure based on the 27 likes that ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Words are Silent

    Wow, this is wonderful. No, not wonderful… After spending ten minutes checking through all the synonyms to that words all I can seem to say is, that piece, you piece, ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That Night

    Okay… Let me start off by explaining how much I love poetry. I will sit and read George Orwell’s poetry on a Saturday night, I do have a life but ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Raining

    Okay, let me start off by informing you that I love rain. I have painted it, photographed it, written about it and most importantly, danced in it. Just so you ...

    Sep 25, 2011


Most people ignore most poetry because most poetry ignores most people.
— Adrian Mitchell