snickerdooly

wow this was freaking amazing (pardon my french) I really liked it my favorite was the first verse! Great job!

Thanks for the review!

Loved it! Definitely true!

I like this you just need to go over it one more time and edit the simple mistakes! Love the way you make your poems about things that are difffrent

Kyllorac, thanks for the review and the really rude way of telling me I'm a hopeless poet. Maybe next time you review someones writing you should take a deep breathe ...

What are you published in?

WOW! I enjoyed this so much!

Thanks! I'm not the greatest at spelling :)

Hey Soul Saver I really enjoyed this poem! After looking at your first draft I think after you edited it, it really helped it! Job well done, By the way ...

I really liked this! There where some confusing parts in the beginning, for example: When he says he had to make the unicorn not a virgin, is the girl a ...

Okay I don't have enough time for a reveiw but i'll be back. What can I say... WOW! Are you really only tweleve? That was amazing, it was really interesting ...

Yes you need to go through a fix the gramatical errors but other than that i foundit very interesting! Please post more.

Thanks guys! I'll fix the formatting this instant... wait not quite. Thanks for the comments this poem came from the heart and yes kristachouinard I am 13!

This is really funny! I like it. Totally understand your humor even if at times it was a bit... hm......... strange. :wink:

Thanks. I definitely need to work on the imagery a bit... or a lot. :wink: