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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The War of The North-Prologue

    hey there jak ... well , i usually don't review short stories or novels , why? i don't know either , maybe because i like reading lyrics more , anyway ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I Don't Wanna Hurt You Anymore

    hey there ash ...smile is here :) i wanna say that your poem was so touching , i almost cried , cause you wrote it from your heart . __i'll ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Think About It

    hiiii so , hmhh..you wrote a very nice poem that i enjoyed reading , it was rhymy , simple , but meaningful, although i found it kinda short , but ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Dying Song

    hey there ok , so firt off i wanna say that i realy liked your work , it's brilliant , i loved how you started this poem , it was ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: Kagaku

    hey there well , i have never thought that i'm gonna enjoy reading a work in category : poetry , science , but your poem changes my mind , it ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Finally, Getting Better.

    hello .... well this was a pretty good poem , i loved the imagery in it , especially these parts : The rain is falling, and for once I am ...

    Dec 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Burn

    hey there im here to review ....... _well generally your poem is nice , meaningful , expressive . _the only thing i didn't like is that it was kind of ...

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: And I held You

    hey there ossum im here to review ...well honestly that was such a beautiful song ,i couldn't find any flaw or mistake to tell you about it ,so i'm just ...

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Paradise

    hello here to review .... well your work was so great , you used a simple sentences ,the imagery was so good , i loved the description ..especially in this ...

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Only one can soar

    hey that was so beautiful , honest poetry that i realy enjoyed reading ,because i love these kinds of writing , its supporting ,and active one . i loved the ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Begging For Liberation

    hey there harshita ....Begging God for liberation well that was a very nice poem , wich i enjoyed reading . the description , the meaning , and the words were ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: December Skies

    hello , im here to review .. so your poem is wonderful from all sides , first the description ( Acrylic black trees ,a cloud of purple ... ) it ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Please Rain

    hey there ...this is a very beautiful song, its so touching , i enjoyed reading every part of it, and i felt like i want to hear it sung too ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black Holes

    hello ,i'm here to review, well i realy liked your work , the theme was intresting , the words , the presentation , it's simple , but meaningful . I ...

    Dec 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am 21

    hey there , well i liked the piece its beautiful , i loved the idea of ''when i was ,19 ,20, then 21'' it like telling a your story in ...

    Dec 11, 2013


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