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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Tired

    Hiya, I'm Jess. I would just like to say this piece is pretty relatable. It could be seen as romantic or just losing a friendship. The lines: I'm tired, and ...

    Sep 7, 2018

  • Poetry » Horror, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Staircase

    Hi, it's me again! This piece is pretty interesting and has some awesome qualities. It takes something that is not that unnormal and creates an inner bubble to look at ...

    Sep 5, 2018


  • Hiya, I'm Jess. I actually LOVE this so much. I know , personally *bein a girl* that I don't have the same trouble talking to guys as some girls or ...

    Aug 30, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Numb

    Hello, I'm Jess. I'd just like to say that this piece is wonderful and really goes into the deeper stuff that happens in one's mind (I share a few of ...

    Aug 29, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Invisible

    Hello, I'm Jess. I really like this piece a lot, it's showing a dark side to the human brain. I also like the way you wrote it, keeping it all ...

    Aug 29, 2018

  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic
    Re: Who am I...?

    Hello!! Nice to review you again. This poem is lovely, absolutely lovely. I admire romance, it's one of my favorite genres, and as it gets written about so much, you ...

    Aug 28, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Yet I continued to live

    Hello again! This is yet again, a brilliant piece of work. I have a couple of lines that I would like to point out as awesome. "My body grew stiff, ...

    Aug 27, 2018

  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical
    Re: His name is Empathy

    Hi, I'm Jess. This piece is definitely one of the best I have read on here. I really like the way you physically wrote it, kinda like a going back ...

    Aug 24, 2018

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: Destined...

    Hello, I'm Jess. I think that this piece is really pretty, and shows the basis of what love is, even if it's one-sided questions being pondered. It's interesting that you ...

    Aug 24, 2018

  • Lyrics » General, Lyrical
    Re: Body

    Hello, to both Z and you! (I'd also like to point out your profile picture is amazing). This is a very interesting piece, I like the point of view Z ...

    Aug 23, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Stopped in Time Chapter 1

    Hiya, I'm Jess. I thought this story was cool, very intriguing. I did have a couple of little things I saw, I'll just pop them out real quick. ''They were ...

    Aug 23, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: I'm sorry, if you ever even see

    Hi,I'm Jess. I think that this piece is very relatable, and I feel like it is something you just went through. You put in detail certain instances, and that adds ...

    Aug 22, 2018


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