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Hey! Sky here for a review. Fast hard gasps that stung his tongue every time he breathes in and sent his breath clouding out in small, steamy explosion every time ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. In the red are changes I would make or grammar changes. I thought that since I was so tired I had forgotten to close ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. I feel like this is based on the story of Rapunzel, so we will see but the title is what caught my attention. So ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. Below are plainly suggestions. Rewording, Grammar, etc.: *The things in red are changes or something you should fix. My mom is the Demeter , ...

Hey! Sky here for some constructive criticism. Just keep in mind that these are my suggestions on how to make your writing better. She turned to look him with dark ...

Hey! Sky here. Just saw this in the green room and realized that I had started to read this story. I reviewed your chapter one and remembered that I had ...

Hey! Sky for a review, sorry it took this long. and ploughed into the beggining of the tiaga, driving itself into the mud and pine needles as it came to ...

Hey! Sky here for another review to this story. He could see Alec and Sofia's beds from where stood. You forgot the he. The stranger took them both to the ...

Hey! Sky here for another review of this story. Sorry this is taking so long... I kind of exhausted my reviews for a while but I'm trying. Here we go. ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. So the only thing I can point out is your grammar mistakes: "Yea I'm a girl, and you grabbed my breasts," she continued to ...

Hey! Sky again :P I saw this up as well and figured why not keep going? Again, suggestions. We must be less than 800 standard meters away from them. "Standard" ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. Purely suggestions, feel free to ignore me. Like most of the people on this station and like me, he's a baseline human. Just a ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. So, I read through this, and wow. I'm pretty speechless right now. I hope this isn't a true story, although I feel like it ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. Just reminding you that these are all suggestions of mine, so by no means do you have to listen to me. Suggestions: The day ...

Hey! Sky here for a review. These are all suggestions, only listen to me if you would like :smt001 This is a really great, creepy story. I just have a ...