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Re: Tekky meets Shane (Spooksville)
Hey! Sky here for a review. Okay.... I'm not sure where to begin or what to address first in this. I guess I should start by saying I truly love ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Intelligent Artist.
Hey! I'm Sky and I'm dropping by for what I hope will be a helpful review. I'm a bit rusty since I haven't done this in such a long time, ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Ice Dance
Hey, Sky here for a review. This is. She thought. The last performance of tonight's event. The one which will determine who will kiss or cry. I would put, "This ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Strangers- chapter one
Hey! Sky here for a review. I mean I know teachers say " Y ou can tell me anything" but let's be real , they don't mean it. Parents, to ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 2
Hey! Sky here, again, for yet another review. Wow... it's been a while. Let's get to it. She felt there were a conga line and 70's dance within it somewhere. ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: My 2 Sentence Horror Stories
Hey! Sky here for a review. Just have to say real quick that horror isn't my favorite so luckily I just woke up. These are all just suggestions by the ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Another unsuccessful day
Hey! Sky here for a review. Normally he would approach such a task like this with the upmost care, I believe it is utmost, not upmost. As pointed out above, ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Spooksville Summary!
Hey! Sky here for a quick review. So for me, it was just a bit hard to follow the story with the really quick back and forth. It's a good ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: One Look
Hey! Sky here for a review. The first thing I want to say is that this was truly an amazing work. It was actually like putting the most beautiful piece ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: An Unfulfilled Dream
Hey! Sky here at your request :smt001 Please remember these are all suggestions. I'm not sure where to start. I have to say this is brilliant. It's just so true ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: Christina and Marcela
Hey! Sky here for a quick review. Just remember that these are all suggestions and you obviously don't have to listen to me. The symbols you have in the first ...
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: Five Year Old with a Color Scheme: Chapter One
Hey! Sky here for a quick review. So the first thing I want to say is I absolutely love love LOVE the color use in this. I think it is ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: His Every Order :: Summary & Chapter one
Hey! Sky here for a review. I realized you posted this a while ago and still haven't gotten any reviews so I figured I'd give you one. I did read ...
Apr 14, 2017 -
Re: draft of start of book any advise welcome!!!
Hey! Sky here, dropping in for a review. Overall, I must say I'm intrigued. Some suggestions I have are to first, read it over. There were a few grammatical blips ...
Apr 10, 2017 -
Re: 344 Days of Ash
Hey! Sky here, just dropping a review :smt001 And once , though I think it was in my dreams, I swear I heard a voice call out to me. I ...
Apr 9, 2017