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No voice called out to greet me Across the blustery breeze My favorite! 'Ello! I really liked your poem. I wish it did not relate to you, because that would ...

'Ello! We were halfway down the street when I realized that I had forgotten to brush my teeth. I love this as an opening like. It almost made me laught, ...

I am wordering wha is going to happen next, you left me with that. All i have to say is you have serious gramatical errors, and im too lazy to ...

I honestly don't think you should have a comma between "Hours" and "Over the dead." It sounds like you don't know how to put comma's in. It definantly sounds better ...

Hiya, again. Well, lets see. Your story was very cute, and different. The fact that you live in India gives you the ability to venture into different places I cannot. ...

Don't count on these being right, but somethings don't sound right to me. Here it is, finally. My light. And from it comes beautiful amber-winged butterflies, that hold blue orbs ...

Hiya! I have to say, there is nothing I really need to correct in your poem. If I can make one slight suggestion, though, it is that you add some ...

I didn't get the chance to read your second chapter, but im sure its just as magical as the first. Your dialogue is amazing. Everything the characters said sounded like ...

'Ello, " Yep, Romeo, prince of Thalspar." Pretty sure a Princess would not say Yep! consider changing it to yes. It is far more formal. " No, not that. The ...

"Such a beautiful creature, but I shall not be tricked by such selfish courtesy. This be the prince from the other kingdom. I'd rather be alone than dance with such ...

Hello! If my grading is not precise, dont listen to it. I did my best! We were staying with our uncle in Steamboat to do some skiing. Yeah, this sentence ...

There is this book I read for a school project in the 6th grade. It is for a younger age group than I am now, but I can't stop loving ...

Hey, I liked it. It was not very descriptive. I felt like you wrote this so quickly just to get to the main point. If you are thinking about continuing, ...

GROSS! Haha, just kidding. I liked it. Your story is definantly original, especially compared to any other work I have read on this site. Your description of death, and the ...

Shalom! Oh goodness. When you started off, i was scared because the first paragraph sounded like the story I am writing. It isn't, though, thank goodness. I did notice any ...