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Drop "into the" for the "into the one hundreds" line. It'll be more efficient.

You don’t understand. I have felt nothing. Don’t pretend to understand me. Don’t pretend to know what I’m talking about. Everything I say comes from my head, a place no ...

Good poem.

A woman with dead children This is good for emotional effect but bad for content. Basically you're dating a girl from Tinder and this comes up? Bad! But dating a ...

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Use your title as a poem itself. With this idea already written.

Good luck!

This poem works well because it is a series of things that are related to. In your, I will. With the repetition of till. The repetition of till works well ...

Hope was small in Pandora's box, Such a good line. And the repetition isn't used so well throughout. Try setting up for it logically, like it was a story.

This is a sad poem. The voice works so well. Keep writing.

Thank you. But But but... I'm already a writer =(

Loved it.

It sounds like a self help book. No review.

Not a problem do it! That's awesome.

Thank you, is there a group for reviewing?