Use a metaphor or simile here. Beautiful suffering looks like? Is like? You know, in a way is the best. Then you fill out the details.
Coming back and smiling playing along to there game of pretend
I don't understand but I love it. You may love this style of writing. Think more about this line.
Suffering in silence
Suffering alone
Beautiful Suffering
These lines work well because they move along a logical pattern but beautiful suffering should be an example.
Great poem after reading it.
Lots of thoughts.
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