shiney1

Hey shiney1 here, and welcome to YWS! I like the concept, and it is understandable. It has some feeling in it, but the imagery could use some work. It does ...

Hi, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling and imagery in this poem, though I agree with the first post, it is no masterpiece. It flows well in some places ...

Hey, shiney1 here! This is a situation many teens face, so it's not a bad place to start. But since you are writing about such an overused topic, you should ...

shiney1 here, and I will be your reviewer today! Well, I can sense the frustration in this poem, the tiredness at life. But this poem lacks many sensory details, imagery, ...

I love this poem. Not only does it have feeling, but truth and insight to the REAL God, the one that does not just love you, that loves you enough ...

You are on a roll today! Very nice poem! I love how the second stanza alludes to the second one. This window I'm staring through It is covered in thick ...

Wonderful! This poem flows so well, and you get an A+ for imagery! This verbal portrait You've painted with soft words. This line got me hooked I can see it ...

Wow! This is very good for a first novel. I love the diction, and the imagery isn't shabby either. I am not one who reviews novels, for I am a ...

Wow. I love this poem! It is a concept that I agree with you wholeheartedly on. I commend you for voicing your opinion on such a matter. I'd hate to ...

I loved the concept. I wonder what my dream would be like if I were swimming alongside my frogs (yes I have frogs) and they would speak without moving their ...

I really like this poem. I love the shifting emotions, and the imagery is just wonderful! Great diction as well. Not much to correct here. Newly fallen snow, was a ...

This was touching. Your friend is blessed to have a friend like you, and happy birthday to them! This poem had a child-like happiness about it. You've been gone awhile ...

This poem was cute,, but it may be hard for me to totally focus on this review since I was trying hard not to laugh at you avatar XD I ...

Okay. Poem does sound like you put it together in five minutes, maybe less. Halfway through I started questioning if this was a poem... The way it is formatted it ...

This poem, was pretty good, but I feel you could have done more.Not written more, but expanded and improve what you have. Some parts sounded like they wanted to rhyme, ...