shiney1

Hey Boo! Well, I love the idea and the theme of this poem, and I am glad to see you trying different approaches. I find the "short and sweet" aspect ...

Hey Boo (can I call you Boo?), here as you requested! First of all let me say that I see much improvement in this acrostic versus your previous ones. You ...

I really like this. I love how it gives enough information for it to be understandable and easy to follow, but at the same time doesn't reveal too much. It ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) What i like about this poem is the feelings I got from it. It boosts your confidence and has a good amount of spirit. There are ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) I love the fact that someone besides me likes to do acrostics, and can do so without those baby lines that seem to be used in ...

Hey, shiney1 here. I love your poems, so I will review :D Well, compared to the other poem I saw, this one is not that up to par. But maybe ...

This is pretty good. I love how you talk about yourself, and the acrostic format. The thing is I wish you expanded on it more. It is a bit too ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) I absolutely love the imagery here! Good use of similes as well. Although, I feel that this poem lacks a great amount of flow, so it ...

I'm back, at your request :D I love that you put more into this! It has reached more of it's potential this way. And I saw some corrections you made, ...

Wow. This is a very deep poem. I have not seen something like this on this site in a long time. And even though it is saddening, it also makes ...

Hey, shiney1 here. I will review this in all of my honesty. This poem is... interesting. It makes sense to a certain extent, but it has to be read quite ...

Hey Sol! That is a very good question, by the way... :/ I like this poem, that it's short and sweet. It flows pretty well for the most part, and ...

Hey, shiney1 here! This poem is short and sweet, and I like that. But many things can be done to improve it. I feel like it was rushed when written, ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) This is an interesting poem, and it does have some truth to it. People do lie to you and fake their love for you, and people ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) I love this poem. I love it. The imagery is astounding, and I could paint a picture in my head of all that went on. The ...