shiney1

Hey, shiney here to review! First Impressions After reading the whole poem the first time, I felt you were trying to say a lot but ended up not saying enough. ...

Hey, shiney's here to review :) First Impressions Well isn't this an interesting piece you've made. The vibe I got from it was indeed darker than than the song I ...

Ah. Firstly, I am quite surprised that you posted something like this. It seems like you have had a change of heart and mind. But that's up to you. Secondly, ...

Hello! shiney1 here :) Overall Impression This poem. This is deep, and so realistic. Father's Day is coming up, and while it's a joyous time for many, it's an old ...

Hello, shiney1 here to review! Overall Impression Whelp. This poem was pretty... depressing. If that's what you were going for, than kudos to you! The diction here was very nice, ...

Hey there, shiney1 here! Overall Impression Very interesting poem! The first two lines grabbed my attention, which is something I like to see. The world this guy lives in sounds ...

Hello, shiney1 here to review! Overall Impression This is a nice, simple yet exceptional poem, in my opinion. It's not gushing at the mouth with large words yet has a ...

Hey, shiney1 here! Overall Impression This is a very cute and sweet poem! It's not so mushy that you become uncomfortable, yet it is still personal enough to sound genuine. ...

Hello there! Shiney's here to review! First Impressions I was pleasantly surprised by route this poem took. A sanctuary can be different things to different people, but I like how ...

Hey, shiney1 here ;) This is a pretty interesting poem you have written here. The creepy yet somewhat sarcastic mood balance off of each other quite nicely. Yet, I feel ...

Very interesting poem here. I was drawn to this because I absolutely love dragons. I saw that you described the dragon pretty well in the poem. The first stanza was ...

You did this yourself? This is awesome!!!!!!!!!! Did it take you a long time to do? (Not much of a review, is it?) But this is very nice, and something ...

Where is it, really? I would like to know (though I think I found an answer). I like this poem because it is relevant, short and simple, and not too ...

This is so simple, yet so meaningful. I love many things about this, but I will name a few: - Short-basic words that re easy to understand - No extra ...

Hey shiney1 here :) This poem is great! Thank you so much for being playful and bringing back the fun in creating and reading poetry for pleasure. I really like ...