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Re: Turning upside down
one problem about this poem is that is lack if poetic quality about this poem.and there is only one kind of imagery used that of a sapling growing into a ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: The Book Shop
a superb punchline at the end of the line.and the line preceding it. brings that eerie feeling of the 'fuhrer' being somewhere down the nose...very near.1933 was the year when ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Sanctuary
that books invoke a cosy atmosphere and homely feeling, is brought out well.however the problem with this composition is-there is too much directness and monotony about it.the words'safety','shelter'
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: This Is It
excellent rhyming scheme.and its maintenance throughout.a short composition which speaks of love death longing,time moving sluggishly-just about everything.one really can never guess the mechanics and
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Coal Wrapped Dream
beautiful depiction of unconditional friendship and dedication crossing the borders of racial discrimination.that the same warmth,the same blood,and the same humanity runs thoughout all races,colours
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Summer Closure
speechless.mind-blowing.you have shown how to create a harmonius melody and rythym without having any proper rhyming scheme.i almost visualise the day you are trying to describe,with the character'wit
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Rose
beautiful.a universe of of emotions in a few lines. indeed,there being so many flowers,the special emphasis attached to rose, might be a little burdensome on the poor flower at times.the ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard
This is The most splendid and heart-touching poem I have come across.this i believe has touched the greatest heights of the feeling of isolation and helplessness-the moment when u feel ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Seven layers of hell.
I also felt the same sensation a few months back.I can identify wiyh you.very well.there was a time when fear drove me.now i drive the fear.I dont know you.i can't ...
Aug 4, 2014 -
Re: I remember that one time...
hello,shikhandini here! Dear Katya, your poem is short and sweet,and not to forget,that 'cat' and 'dissecting part was a little bit creepy.your poem seems to yell out he courage you ...
Jun 30, 2014
