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shikhandini

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Turning upside down

    one problem about this poem is that is lack if poetic quality about this poem.and there is only one kind of imagery used that of a sapling growing into a ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: The Book Shop

    a superb punchline at the end of the line.and the line preceding it. brings that eerie feeling of the 'fuhrer' being somewhere down the nose...very near.1933 was the year when ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Sanctuary

    that books invoke a cosy atmosphere and homely feeling, is brought out well.however the problem with this composition is-there is too much directness and monotony about it.the words'safety','shelter'

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: This Is It

    excellent rhyming scheme.and its maintenance throughout.a short composition which speaks of love death longing,time moving sluggishly-just about everything.one really can never guess the mechanics and

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Coal Wrapped Dream

    beautiful depiction of unconditional friendship and dedication crossing the borders of racial discrimination.that the same warmth,the same blood,and the same humanity runs thoughout all races,colours

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Summer Closure

    speechless.mind-blowing.you have shown how to create a harmonius melody and rythym without having any proper rhyming scheme.i almost visualise the day you are trying to describe,with the character'wit

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rose

    beautiful.a universe of of emotions in a few lines. indeed,there being so many flowers,the special emphasis attached to rose, might be a little burdensome on the poor flower at times.the ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard

    This is The most splendid and heart-touching poem I have come across.this i believe has touched the greatest heights of the feeling of isolation and helplessness-the moment when u feel ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Seven layers of hell.

    I also felt the same sensation a few months back.I can identify wiyh you.very well.there was a time when fear drove me.now i drive the fear.I dont know you.i can't ...

    Aug 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    hello,shikhandini here! Dear Katya, your poem is short and sweet,and not to forget,that 'cat' and 'dissecting part was a little bit creepy.your poem seems to yell out he courage you ...

    Jun 30, 2014


You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved
— GengarTheGhost